Grievous punishment is for him who forsakes the way; He who hates reproof will die.
Correction is grievous unto him that forsaketh the way: And he that hateth reproof shall die.
There is severe discipline for him who forsakes God's way; and he who hates reproof will die [physically, morally, and spiritually].
There is grievous correction for him that forsaketh the way; And he that hateth reproof shall die.
Discipline is severe for those who abandon the way; those who hate correction will die.
Doctrine is evil to those who abandon the way of life. Whoever hates correction shall die.