But when Herod's birthday was kept, the daughter of Herodias danced before them, and pleased Herod.
But when Herod's birthday came, the daughter of Herodias danced in the midst [before the company] and pleased and fascinated Herod,
But when Herod’s birthday came, the daughter of Herodias danced in the midst, and pleased Herod.
But at Herod’s birthday party Herodias’ daughter danced in front of the guests and thrilled Herod.
Then, on Herod's birthday, the daughter of Herodias danced in their midst, and it pleased Herod.