Everything on the dry land in whose nostrils were the breath and spirit of life died.
all in whose nostrils was the breath of life, of all that was in the dry land, died.
all in whose nostrils was the breath of the spirit of life, of all that was on the dry land, died.
Everything on dry land with life’s breath in its nostrils died.
and everything in which there is the breath of life on earth, died.